Well. I'm sort of struggling with this one.
Sue me, I've never tried to write a piece of romance before. To buy myself a little more time, I'm going to post something else I wrote back in September. It's a little personal, but I did like the imagery.
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I love
But I cannot touch
For another man
Not by his will
But hers
Holds me at bay
She burns
Her body and soul
Radiant as the sun
I am renewed by her
And destroyed
I'm chipping away at the other piece I'm writing. Wish me luck.
1 comments:
Evocative. The story behind it is there, screaming at the reader. If you can, try to use that for some of your writing. Unrequited feelings tug at people's heartstrings because most of us have experienced them, I think its something people would enjoy reading, even if you make it fictional.
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